my stunning first cousin from the Cape
was cunning enough to escape
down the ladder of the bunk
before a young punk
got her drunk in the bunk prior to rape
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amazing and great story!
Mihrank,
Thank you
Oh shit…
Thanks, Rajiv!
Just as well thera was a ladder!!!!!!!!!!
Absolutely, Rosa!
Gracias y un abrazo
John
Loved it!
Thank you, Myra, hope it brought a smile and a chuckle
I don’t suppose that I should have laughed quite as much at this – but I did! Strange how the things that are the least ‘Politically Correct’ are often the funniest.
Once again you have shown great dexterity in your writing, John.
A fellow ‘believer’ in ‘politically incorrect’
of course nowadays one has to watch virtually every word one says in public and we may be the poorer for that..but enough!
Thank you, Chris, thank you
I hope this didn’t actually happen. If it did, I hope she got the help she needed to cope with the incident.
Thank you, Halim, for the comments. No, this is pure (or impure?) fiction, just in my wicked head, my saturday bit of madness.
Best to you, My Friend
john
Haha, good to know! Cheers, John!
Thank goodness she was so cunning 🙂
Thank goodness indeed, Willow! Cunning won the day..thank you
for all your support, i appreciate it and i appreciate you and your fine work, too.
john
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Great one brother John!
Glad you liked it, Brother Swetank. Thank you for the support, it’s encouragement to me
even when i write my saturday bits of ‘madness’
You take the best care
john
Brother John, I hope you are doing well!! I had a new post will love your thoughts on them. Be Bettr Stay Bettr!!
Have just read and commented, Brother, and they are GOOD
brilliant limerick John, love it! I have tried to write limerick, it is not easy!
Thank you, Hollie, for the generous comment, just my Saturday ‘bit of madness’ ; I have lots more but most of them aren’t suitable for a ‘family show’ so they won’t see the light of day..anyway, thank you again
John
Interesting and raw way to turn rough things into poetry…
You are defiitely talented, my dear John.
Best wishes, Aquileana 😀
Thank you, Aquileana, you are more than generous. Always my best to you
John
“Like” cuz she escaped! Now I’m imagining my own part two where the rapist tried to go after her but fell from the ladder and broke it’s skull, LOL.
Jenny, LOVE the possibility of your follow-up, just great! Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
My best to you
John
The right combination of skill and wit.
Limericks and Haiku are not my forte. But then, I’m not certain that I have a forte regarding the written word! Your limerick is quite special and very entertaining for his chap John.
Hurray. We need more stunning young things scurrying down ladders, just in time.